UFOET64's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Weiss gets a lapdance]

Heh heh heh. Oh Yang, I think you traumatized her, sweetie. Although the glass table is supposed to show Weiss's booty, putting weight on the glass could shatter if Yang got on Weiss's lap. We don't want the broken shards to cut the girls, now do we? Overall, the comic was pretty funny.

~~DETAILS TO IMPROVE ON~~

The perspective in this piece makes some proportions a bit off. Yang's legs look unusually long. Not much is seen about Weiss other than her butt on the glass seat. Giving Weiss a more surprised look could make the humor more convincing.

RavenRavenRaven responds:

Thanks for your feedback. I do feel like I could have done a better job with Weiss' expression looking back on it now and yeah my bad if Yang's legs look a bit off due to the perspective. Perspective is always a tricky thing for me but I always enjoy the challenge that I get from it but hopefully the next time I draw these two, they come out looking a little better.

[Gogo Stretching]

Oh dear, her shirt looks like it's about to fall down her neck and expose her chest. Pardon the criticism regarding the ratings, but doesn't her situation make this piece more rated M than T?

Such a flexible piece you made of Gogo, by the way.

RavenRavenRaven responds:

While it is provocative, there isn't any actual nudity which is why it got a T rating but if more people let me know about how it should be higher rated then yeah I'd be ok with bumping it up to M.

[Commission: Marty Gardner]

Aww, her costume is so mermaid-like, I mistook her for Ariel as a showgirl at first glance. Looks amazing!

[Welcome Back]

Wow, fanart for Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Explorers of Time, Darkness and Sky. Although PMD was merely part of the Pokémon franchise, I loved this game for its intense storytelling, beautiful soundtrack, crisp colors and its greater variety of characters.

The bubbles and sunset blend nicely with the beach scenario. The tearful reunion between the Pokémon seems very heartwarming.

driftwoodwolf responds:

It's such a good game! Thanks! :)

[Frankie Dakimakura]

Wow, a Frankie Foster Dakimakura. I haven't seen one involving her before, impressive job.

~~DETAILS TO IMPROVE ON~~

The dakimakura could use some more detail. For example, Frankie has an insatiable appetite for her grandmother's cookies (which she makes once a year). So Frankie could have a box of cookies and a spilled glass of milk laying on the bed.

RavenRavenRaven responds:

Thanks for the feedback. If I end up going back and spending some more time on this image, I could try adding some cookies around her. That sounds like a nice detail to add.

[(Commission) Lori]

Your least favorite, huh? In my opinion, you totally kicked ass in Lori's animation. She looks like an awesome heroine in a fighting game.

gatekid3 responds:

I didnt design them. i merely made the animations.

[FAP MAN]

Fap—what? Ha ha ha, awesome! This makes a crude and hilarious mix of Batman and Oney. Oney cartoons, yay!

[Jotaru Kujo !]

At first glance, I mistook chibi Jotaro for Goku with a hip outfit. The style looks reminiscent of Dragon Ball in my perspective. Nice job, man!

vakodraws responds:

Oooh thats the first time somebody has compared my art style to Toriyamas ! Thank you ! <3

[Eldegoss and Whimsicott]

But what about Jumpluff, they want to join these cotton babies too.

[butt WITCH]

This is hilarious! Butt Witch, you'll need to get off Big Deal's face soon, you might fart on him on accident. 😝