UFOET64's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[🌀🌀Commission: The Maxx🌀🌀]

The Maxx is a confused, hulking, homeless superhero who tries to protect his social worker and friend, Julie Winters, in the real world and the Outback (the fantasy world).

You did a splendid job in this take on The Maxx, mate.👍

Liam-SG responds:

Thanks bro

[Teen Titans Valentines]

Whoa, that's some wild lingerie they're wearing, but I don't really consider it Valentine's Day themed. I think it's like any other art involving sexy, half-naked pinup models, but with heart effects and a heart background.

To make this more effective, I would give the girls' lingerie more variety in color instead of just black. You could have them wear red or pink while Raven or Jinx could still wear black. Jinx and Raven both look nice in black, but I'm not sure which could wear a shade of purple.

RavenRavenRaven responds:

I think I can see where you're coming from. Nevertheless I just wanted to do something a little spicy for the occasion. Thanks for the feedback on the lingerie too. My preference does lean towards all black lingerie but I'll try and see if I can add a bit of color to them if I do another piece similar to this again.

[Weiss gets a lapdance]

Heh heh heh. Oh Yang, I think you traumatized her, sweetie. Although the glass table is supposed to show Weiss's booty, putting weight on the glass could shatter if Yang got on Weiss's lap. We don't want the broken shards to cut the girls, now do we? Overall, the comic was pretty funny.

~~DETAILS TO IMPROVE ON~~

The perspective in this piece makes some proportions a bit off. Yang's legs look unusually long. Not much is seen about Weiss other than her butt on the glass seat. Giving Weiss a more surprised look could make the humor more convincing.

RavenRavenRaven responds:

Thanks for your feedback. I do feel like I could have done a better job with Weiss' expression looking back on it now and yeah my bad if Yang's legs look a bit off due to the perspective. Perspective is always a tricky thing for me but I always enjoy the challenge that I get from it but hopefully the next time I draw these two, they come out looking a little better.

[Gogo Stretching]

Oh dear, her shirt looks like it's about to fall down her neck and expose her chest. Pardon the criticism regarding the ratings, but doesn't her situation make this piece more rated M than T?

Such a flexible piece you made of Gogo, by the way.

RavenRavenRaven responds:

While it is provocative, there isn't any actual nudity which is why it got a T rating but if more people let me know about how it should be higher rated then yeah I'd be ok with bumping it up to M.

[Welcome Back]

Wow, fanart for Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Explorers of Time, Darkness and Sky. Although PMD was merely part of the Pokémon franchise, I loved this game for its intense storytelling, beautiful soundtrack, crisp colors and its greater variety of characters.

The bubbles and sunset blend nicely with the beach scenario. The tearful reunion between the Pokémon seems very heartwarming.

driftwoodwolf responds:

It's such a good game! Thanks! :)

[Frankie Dakimakura]

Wow, a Frankie Foster Dakimakura. I haven't seen one involving her before, impressive job.

~~DETAILS TO IMPROVE ON~~

The dakimakura could use some more detail. For example, Frankie has an insatiable appetite for her grandmother's cookies (which she makes once a year). So Frankie could have a box of cookies and a spilled glass of milk laying on the bed.

RavenRavenRaven responds:

Thanks for the feedback. If I end up going back and spending some more time on this image, I could try adding some cookies around her. That sounds like a nice detail to add.

[(Commission) Lori]

Your least favorite, huh? In my opinion, you totally kicked ass in Lori's animation. She looks like an awesome heroine in a fighting game.

gatekid3 responds:

I didnt design them. i merely made the animations.

[Jotaru Kujo !]

At first glance, I mistook chibi Jotaro for Goku with a hip outfit. The style looks reminiscent of Dragon Ball in my perspective. Nice job, man!

vakodraws responds:

Oooh thats the first time somebody has compared my art style to Toriyamas ! Thank you ! <3

[Frankie and Demencia swap outfits]

Whenever I see Demencia from Villainous, I envision Frankie Foster going punk. In part because they resemble each other via art styles and character designs. Now here they are, swapping outfits. This is priceless!

RavenRavenRaven responds:

I get the feeling that was a lot of our reactions when we first saw Demencia. It's almost like she could have been Frankie from an alternate universe.

[Rose Knight]

Looking at this made me think of the anime Revolutionary Girl Utena, but with vampires.

PrincessMisery responds:

exactly